Date: 20/12/15 - 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Purchase
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Date: 08/09/15 - 01:24 am Title: Chapter 1: The Purchase
Just so you know, I saw that this appeared on fimfiction.net, under a different username. I see that it has been taken down, though.
That was me! I was trying re-write my story in FIMfiction so it could get more reviews! I did not 'plagiarize' myself. I need the ban on that account lifted so I can resume my work. :(
Date: 16/05/14 - 03:10 am Title: Chapter 1: The Purchase
Other than the spelling, I have two concerns. 1.) At the point I've read up to (Chapter 4) The kid has spent more of his life under the Sparkle family than he had spent under a slaver. Why is he still acting broken? 2.) Princess Celestia herself said she doesn't like the way humans are treated. She's an absolute monarch. She could easily have prevented the abusive behaviour from ever happening.
These just really stand out as strange.
Date: 26/03/14 - 09:51 am Title: Chapter 1: The Purchase
Apart from spelling errors this is AWESOME!!! I mean it was a really good build up, excellent concept and the smexy stuff wasn't to overboard. Perhaps you could have given fives some more description as far as hair and stuff but overal it was the best fanfic that I have read in a while! Can I please make a front cover for it????
I am flattered you like my story. As for the spelling errors, I will proof-read and correct the story many times before I say it is complete. You are completely right about Fives needing a more physical description as well. I have no idea what a front cover is (fan art maybe?) but if you eat to make one, go ahead. I would love to see it.
Date: 11/03/14 - 01:27 am Title: Chapter 2: Touring The Sparkle
I like this story so far. I'm pretty excited to see how it turns out. Keep up the good work!
I apritiate your review and excellent rate. For my first story, I wasn't sure to many people would actually like it.