Date: 17/04/14 - 02:09 am Title: Chapter 1
Holy fucking shit. I thought I would never find stuff like this, since everything is ponyfied. Dude, for the love of god, keep going! Some spelling mistakes and incorrect grammar but that's ok. Keep going!
Edit: Sorry about the pumpkin and pound demand. I got you confused with another writer here.
I heard Pumpkin and Pound and am very interest! All the Cakes are my favs.
Please send me a link.
Date: 31/03/14 - 06:39 am Title: Chapter 8
Well, I do see spelling and grammatical mistakes. Something any decent editor should be able to take care of.
Overall, this is damn good so far. I look forward to reading more!
Yeah... I kinda didn't proof this anything beyond basic spell check.
I'll do that if/when I add new chapters.