Reviews For Sweets on a Train 2: Return Trip
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Reviewer: Deadman24 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/10/14 - 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

iv seen more graphics but hey its good thus far

Reviewer: Brony95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/14 - 12:38 am Title: Chapter 10

Aww! When i seen that the story had been updated i was hopeing it would be finished! :( Please do so! It is an AWESOME story!

Reviewer: Brony95 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22/07/14 - 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 8


Reviewer: Jinglekeys96 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25/05/14 - 02:24 am Title: Chapter 1

Realy good. Loved every second i loved the first one too... It deserves a hug!

Reviewer: Zod Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/05/14 - 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is an interesting and I whould love to see more

Reviewer: ASF Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/04/14 - 02:09 am Title: Chapter 1

Holy fucking shit. I thought I would never find stuff like this, since everything is ponyfied. Dude, for the love of god, keep going! Some spelling mistakes and incorrect grammar but that's ok. Keep going!

Edit: Sorry about the pumpkin and pound demand. I got you confused with another writer here.

Author's Response:

I heard Pumpkin and Pound and am very interest! All the Cakes are my favs.

Please send me a link.

Reviewer: Biker Dash Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 31/03/14 - 06:39 am Title: Chapter 8

Well, I do see spelling and grammatical mistakes. Something any decent editor should be able to take care of.


Overall, this is damn good so far. I look forward to reading more!

Author's Response:

Yeah... I kinda didn't proof this anything beyond basic spell check.

I'll do that if/when I add new chapters.

Reviewer: Biker Dash Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/03/14 - 05:25 am Title: Chapter 1

You know, I would have followed you on FiMfic... but I ALREADY follow you there lol


Reviewer: Daiosharune Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/03/14 - 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 8

Oh my wow... this is so much better than the first one... Gotta have more!

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