Reviews For Test story one
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Reviewer: mrtrololol Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/01/15 - 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 1 In The Window

I like wher this storie is.going. But maybe you could add some dramatic storyline.

Reviewer: Brony king Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/05/14 - 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 1 In The Window

Although I usually don't read stories this short or post much, I think that with some more detail and writing, this might be a good story. However, it isn't as good as hoped since it's so short. Still, good job considering this is your first story! Bro hoof!

Brony king

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