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Date: 10/06/14 - 12:02 am Title: Marked

This was an amazing story. It has alot of engaging aspects with it's darker yet somewhat comical tone. I'd love to see this story expanded upon. You're a great writer as I can see, keep pursuing that!



Author's Response:

Thanks. Glad to hear that. I put a lot of work and effort into it. Trying to stay true to the original charater, along with expanding the universe. And most my work got a comical undertone :P

Not too much sure what I could expand on it, but appriciate the words, and hope you can find any of my similar stories of interest as well.

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