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Reviewer: zzzzz Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23/01/17 - 02:45 am Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: ThatGuyWhoMadeAReview Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/01/16 - 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 2

LegendaryHood, to be honest, I didnt know what to expect from this story since the title immediately gave me a main character. I have to say this was good, a lot of potential, and with a little graphic detail and explanation to some scenes would make this story a Masterpiece. To help you out here are my suggestions. 1.Why: is adam in equestria, and did fluttershy betray her since she is a shy type (it makes no sense to me). 2. What: is adam planning to do ,go back to earth, stay in equestria, or just go f*** all the characters? 3. My personal suggestion: Make this an insert reader. Forget adam and place your self. Describe the explicit scenes better. Plan the ending. Decide if it ends well or goes horribly wrong. Overall review is Good.(I hope this gets better or updated) Best Wishes, ThatGuyWhoMadeAReview

Reviewer: DerpMuffinBrony24 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/02/15 - 02:10 am Title: Chapter 2

Nice Betrayal at the end I loved this story really good wish it had more chapters but still badass

 

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