Date: 17/04/12 - 01:08 am Title: Chapter 1
This was an amazingly well-written piece of work! Rainbow Dash was in-character, had a very nice romance, and few things to feel some emotion for! Only problem I had with this was, it just stops instead on ends, you have to make a chapter 2 please!
Date: 20/09/11 - 02:23 am Title: Chapter 1
"Rainbow Dash has rainbow-striped hair because of her name and because she is very interested in sports, specifically flying. She is a tomboy, but nowhere in the show is her sexual orientationa279; ever referenced. As we all know, there are plenty of straight tomboys in the world, and assuming they are lesbians is extremely unfair to both straight and lesbian tomboys." From Lauren Faust
Never says she's not a lesbian anon. She could have destroyed the critic if she had just said "she's not a lesbian." But she didn't. Now why do you suppose that is?
Date: 03/09/11 - 11:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Nice, pretty in character for RD.
Date: 17/08/11 - 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: 07/08/11 - 08:03 am Title: Chapter 1
PLEASSEEEEE MAKE A CHAPTER 2!!! I LOVE THIS!!! IT CANT END AT HIM GOING INTO HER HOUSE!!!!!
Date: 28/07/11 - 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Brilliant job. My only problem was how confusing it was to start off, causing me to take a while to figure out exaclty what was going on. That, and the story doesn't end, it jsut...stops...Well, I think it needs to go further.
Date: 25/07/11 - 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'ma ctually pleasantly surprised by how well this turned out. I've read so many fan fictions lately that I've practically gotten sick of reading one odd abberation after another, and even though this was a somewhat strange pairing, I really was absorbed in the delivery.
I'd say you accomplished your goal, it has some explicit stuff, but I'd definietely say that you were able to pull off a good romance here.