[Report This]Date: 04/06/12 - 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
VERY impressive with the colorful vocab. nice work on it.
[Report This]Date: 16/03/12 - 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great story! Great amount of details. Perfect story before the ''naughty part'' began.
However. The end may have been cliffhanger, but I still think it was too abrupt.
I somewhat expected to get to read something like: ''As AJ didn't know what to do with the pens, she lifted up the broken mug and placed it and the pens back on the desk''
And then somekind of knowing that Diamond Tiaras parent was just about to use one of them.
Summary: Great story but too rushed to a cliffhanger.
Date: 02/02/12 - 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
The best part had to be the cliffhanger ending. I would be much oblidged if you made a sequal.
Date: 02/02/12 - 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Amazing. I'll admit that at first I was sort of troubled by the pairing, but you made it work. So... click, save, aaaand... print.
Lovely.
Teacher domination FTW.
[Report This]Date: 23/11/11 - 05:23 am Title: Chapter 1
Have to agree, this was fantastic. Like the above reviewer, I'd love to see more "lessons", although I differ in not minding the ending. Awkwardness is teh win.
Date: 21/11/11 - 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was HOT. Never read a fanfic with Cheerilee before, and it turned out AWESOME! Shabby the ending was a bit saddening, but meh... you can't have everything.
Would love to see a sequel to this :)
