Date: 11/11/12 - 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great story. Keep up the good work.



[Report This]Date: 08/02/12 - 12:32 am Title: Chapter 1
Cool but didn't make that much sense to me
Date: 07/09/11 - 06:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Thinking of Soarin' flying as a human amuses me to no end. Sure, he could have a plane, but it's just funny thinking about it.



[Report This]Date: 03/09/11 - 09:02 am Title: Chapter 1
I didn't know anything could be so funny and so hot at the same time. Nice job.


[Report This]Date: 02/09/11 - 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
In one word: Hilarious.


[Report This]Date: 01/09/11 - 08:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Not bad. But I found several places where you used the wrong pronoun. A few spelling and grammar mistakes also kept pulling me out of the story. It's always best to double and triple read a story to make sure that you catch as many mistakes as possible.

