Date: 08/04/12 - 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 1: Dark Dreams
Fan-bloomin'-tastic, I tell ya. Honestly, I'd almost forgotten about the Western part of the story. Though I was looking forward to another chapter with the mane characters, I'm not at all displeased with this one, and I'm quite glad it was released so quickly after the last. Thank you!
I guess it's worth mentioning I've commented on every chapter since nineteen, so to avoid screwing with the rating system, I'll hold my ratings until you're finished with the whole of this saga of a fanfic.
Date: 23/02/12 - 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 1: Dark Dreams
Easily my favorite incarnation of the "let's turn this happy sappy ideal world on its head" genre of MLP fanfiction. Furthermore, I love Celestia best when she is depicted as the supreme ruler that she is, so this just tickles me silly.
Please continue; this story is why I keep coming back to the site.
Date: 21/02/12 - 12:59 am Title: Chapter 19
Your scriptures are like an ax
Depending on its given swing it can give protection or pain
These ratings are to little for me to describe your potential
Everything you create is maagnificent
From beginning to end your stories
are light and dark
Loving and scornful
peaceful and destructive.
please do not stop writing
I go by everyday craving more
And more of this
The stories the characters
Thank you for your work