Reviews For Pinkie, you talk to much
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Reviewer: DPV111 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/12 - 01:11 am Title: Chapter 1

Hey. You need editing. try fimchan or you can drop me a line at

orgasmdragon@yahoo.ca

I'm willing to offer my services as long as this fic isn't a rapefic.



Author's Response:

Hey. Ill take you up on your offer. Already send you a mail.

Reviewer: kits Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: 03/01/12 - 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

You seriouly need to format this. It's unreadable.

For one thing, everytime you change who is speaking, you need a new paragraph. 

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