Date: 23/04/12 - 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Three reviews? That's it? Really?!
I can't stress enough how consistently awesome your writing is. Well done, yet again.
Author's Response:
Thank you. Glad you like it! (Eh. Maybe it's the stallion in the mix, or the threesome itself, or the rarepairing ... I don't know. People seem to like A Graceful Submission much better. Intriguing.)
Date: 28/02/12 - 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
But I don't think we want him soft, Bon-Bon. just couldn't stand not laughing at that
[Report This]Date: 29/01/12 - 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
I literally cannot find a single error with this. Not in the mechanics, not in the set-up, and certainly not in the clop, or the resolution. As the previous review mentioned, the justification and build-up of everything was one of the best parts, and everything was handled so well that the opening stage-setting was a pleasure to read instead of a chore.
Never stop being awesome, y'hear?
[Report This]Date: 10/01/12 - 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was utterly delightful~ You really have a knack for building a well-structured plotline to justify everything that's going to happen. And of course the clop scene was superb as always. I'm all about everypony's favorite lesbians getting stuffed with dicks, after all.
