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Reviewer: Maxsteele Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/12/14 - 12:11 pm Title: Angels Release

This chapter was also great. Angel got to have fun with Fluttershy as he wanted, Fluttershy had her own fun in Sweet Apple Acres, and all her animal friends including Opalenscence are happy for now. I hope you write the next chapter soon. :D

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Date: 05/12/14 - 10:38 am Title: Bunny Buck Season

Well I'm glad that Fluttershy helps her animals when they are in the mood. I'm sure it's good for both of them and whenever Fluttershy gets a coltfriend or marefriend, she be able to enjoy it from the start without any pain.

Reviewer: Brony95 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18/07/14 - 06:07 pm Title: Angels Release

Great story so far. Cant wait for the next instalment.

Reviewer: KinkyCelestia Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/02/12 - 10:14 am Title: Bunny Buck Season

Well, the sex/word ratio in this is far too low for a clopfic. You need to expand you sex scenes man!



Author's Response:

But I don't want to just have pure sex scenes D:

Reviewer: FabledDyf Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/02/12 - 09:18 pm Title: Bunny Buck Season

The Tags had me clopping before I started reading :3

Only thing I can say is, Fix this...

 

 Angel was tugged down with her landing on her (( Fluttershy's )) belly.

It sounds like Angel is a female as well.

 

Also here.

Angel gave her a discerning look as he pointed a paw behind him at her     (( Fluttershy's )) special place.

 

Other then those two spots, I like it so far.

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