Date: 23/04/13 - 12:31 am Title: Applejack
Right then... Remind me to not use you for a test subject when I invent a dream viewer...
[Report This]Date: 11/03/13 - 04:07 pm Title: Delivery/Fluttershy
Please make the next chapter where you fuck derpy hooves :D
Date: 20/02/13 - 01:55 pm Title: Applejack
I really am enjoying this too much to be healthy.... Whatever I am going to clop hard with no regrets
Date: 18/12/12 - 05:03 pm Title: Delivery/Fluttershy
*reads all eleven* moar. You are amazing at this. (although you did discriminate by not giving Granny Smith her own chapter)
Date: 16/12/12 - 09:49 pm Title: Big Macintosh
nvrmind, noticed what it said.
Date: 16/12/12 - 09:48 pm Title: Big Macintosh
*gets to end of chapter* *sees next chapter is rarity* what the fuck man? kinda forgot to change that.
Date: 29/11/12 - 04:02 am Title: Applejack
will be waiting for next chapter
[Report This]Date: 07/11/12 - 04:30 pm Title: Applejack
This is really great. Are you going to finish this?
Date: 14/10/12 - 10:00 pm Title: Applejack
I really enjoyed this! However, I do have one slight problem with it so far.
Essentially, each section seems to be someone having totally enjoyable consensual sex with the ponies, and then leaving. Aside from Discord attempting to curse the main character and failing, I'm yet to see anything that would keep someone from succeeding...
I'm sure you have more planned, and I do like the sex. I just feel like there could be more tension.
