Date: 19/10/12 - 01:15 am Title: Chapter 1: Surprises all around
Been keeping track of your story for about 2-3 weeks now.
I gotta say, that was an amazing and touching story. Perfect for a Trixie fan, too (I thought you might've cut her out at the end, let alone have her win Twilight's heart)!
All my stars. Thanks for the great read! /)
Date: 18/10/12 - 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 19: The Decision
you should make a solo story for each mare, a what would happened if the other two didnt show up or there own stroy cause each mares back story is goodnuff to be its own fic, i would really appreciate it if you did own with just twilight and spitfire
Date: 26/08/12 - 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 14: She Said Yes!
Ive been following your story for awhile now since about Chapter 9 and i love it. i get so into it that i believe im almost there watching it happen i hope you can get the next chapter out soon because i get annoyed when i dont get my daily dose of this story. so i leave you with my praise and my encouragement
Thank you, and I'm glad you're enjoying it so much. ^_^
Date: 17/08/12 - 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 1: Surprises all around
Any chance for more?
More is on the way. A total of twelve chapters so far are out (2 of the chapters are just clop free versions of the clop heavy versions), with more coming.
Date: 15/07/12 - 02:37 am Title: Chapter 1: Surprises all around
That last chapter seems as though Luna is planning on playing a cruel trick. A very cruel trick. I sincerely hope that is not the case (because honestly, who really can compete with Spitfire?).
Will keep reading until I find out what happens.
Luna is still learning the social mores of a society 1000 years in advance of what she remembers. It'll come to her with time.
Date: 15/07/12 - 01:18 am Title: Chapter 7: Dear Diary (clop heavy version)
Pretty good so far, but for some reason chapter 6 was... odd for me to read. It just didn't seem to flow as well as the other chapters and I had to re-read a few parts to clarify. Then again, I am pretty tired so it might just be me.
Sorry to hear that. Without specific examples though, I can't really help that. Sorry.