Reviews For Keeping It Professional
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Reviewer: Brony95 Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: 16/07/14 - 11:04 am Title: Keeping it Alcoholic

Good overall story. In my opinion it could have used a little more clop and a better ending...but hey thats just me.

Reviewer: BronyJ Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/06/12 - 03:28 am Title: Keeping it Alcoholic

Haha, dude, as your first fic, this was great!!! I for one love the background ponies and really like seeing them get some attention from somepony, especially Lyra!( I mean what's. Of to love about her?). Anyway now for some constructive criticism..... Honestly I have nothing wrong here, like I said, I found the whole thing amazingly hilarious and not too sex detailed( every now and the somepony goes WAY overboard with the descriptions of it all) really the only thing I was upset about is the fact that I was having such a good time reading this and went to hit the next chapter button for more, only to find out there wasn't any extra hiding behind a link....... But all in all a great start, I'll definitely keep an eye out for your stuff in the future, just next time, make me more to read, haha!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Your critique means the world to me. I'm working on the second one right now! :)

And of course, everyone loves Lyra. Don't worry, her apperance wasn't a one time thing!

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