Date: 16/08/12 - 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Not bad, I would prefer it ponified, but not bad.
A little generic, but sweet nontheless. Could use some more description when Rarity recieves, and maybe some more descriptions of their movements.
Sometimes it was a bit hard to tell that it was humanized.
And as for the other review, all ponies are horses, not all horses are ponies. A pony is a horse that is under 158cm wither height, or something.