Reviews For My shattered heart
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Reviewer: PlotF Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/08/12 - 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

Not bad, I would prefer it ponified, but not bad.
A little generic, but sweet nontheless. Could use some more description when Rarity recieves, and maybe some more descriptions of their movements.
Sometimes it was a bit hard to tell that it was humanized.

And as for the other review, all ponies are horses, not all horses are ponies. A pony is a horse that is under 158cm wither height, or something.

Reviewer: killer booster Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11/08/12 - 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

it was a good story but they are not horses they are ponys. the ponys are smaller then horses; i did spot some spelling errers and grammer

it was good but could be better 5/10

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