Date: 14/09/12 - 01:41 am Title: Revenge
Wait, so pinkie died do to being de-marked, and de-tailed, because the injuries previously didn't kill her. It's not that this wasn't good, cause it was, but it's a little vague at the end.
Author's Response: What do you suppose I do to make it a better ending for you? I'm open to mostly any suggestions. Btw... Thanks for the feedback. I wasn't sure about this story anyway. Lol