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Reviewer: qq888 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/03/18 - 04:51 am Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: Kathleen K Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/01/18 - 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

Thanks for posting the best site for custom essay today and chapter # 3 of the story. But I have missed the chapter 2 could you please from where I can read this on the blog as I didn’t find any option to read the 3rd one please guide.

Reviewer: TieDyeGirl42 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/03/13 - 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 3

This is sort of odd, but I love it! You really should add a new chapter.

Reviewer: MrCornographic Signed star [Report This]
Date: 16/03/13 - 02:16 am Title: Chapter 3

I like what you're trying to do, but it almost feels like I'm reading a skeleton.
A very thin skeleton is a good way to put it. You have a good set of ideas, but they really need some fleshing out.

Try reading some of the other stories here to see how you can add development to your stories and make things flow smoothly (Sargeant Sprinkles' "Cupcakes" is a great example of this in gorefics).

If you can add mmore dialogue between the characters, maybe express the characters thoughts and feelings, and add a little more action (like facial expressions, gestures, actual movement), you'll have a good story going (you might even add a prologue to show why the CMC decide to finally kill those two, also :3 ).

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