Date: 03/06/13 - 03:26 am Title: Going to Equestria
Wow that was a fast response! I actually just did, I didn't notice it till a minute ago, sorry. And that was an interesting plot wrinkle, I liked it. You can never have too much Trixie, and you didn't disappoint there either. Just the same problem, felt a little fast, but that's alright the story made up for any little details that I could find fault with. Oh also one more suggestion for your writing, Making the dialogue seperate can be a pain, but makes the lines easier to read and seem less jumbled. Overall I liked this story as a whole, and again, Trixie is awesome, so great job!
Author's Response: Writing so early in the morning can be a pain! On top of overloading myself, my Facebook account got the block hammer for thirty days, so...yeah.
Date: 03/06/13 - 03:13 am Title: Going to Equestria
I'm going to admit I was skeptical of a Trixie clopfic, but truth be told I am a major Trixie lover so I am going to love it almost no matter what. You did a very good job with this fic, I liked the way you set it up and made the story believable (by fan fiction standards). One complaint I do have though, is that it was too fast. Everything seemed to happen in minutes not hours or a day, that's a big deal in writing something like this. Other than that though, you had good character dialogue and it was a good sex scene, but again, it was very fast. Regardless of that, you wrote a good clopfic, and besides it had Trixie in it so it makes it better for me anyway. Anyway it was a good story, and I am glad to have read and reviewed it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, J! I worked really hard on this, and currently am working on both "The Bloodlust Trilogy" and "The Ballad of Pinkamina Diane Pie", so planning out the one-shots isn't my forte as of now. Did you read the second chapter, by any chance? ~PrinceNightstar