Date: 06/06/13 - 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Adorably written, completely realized, and some of the most masterful clop on this site, mixing the sweetness of romance and the sweat of lusty adrenaline. The pairing is unexpected, but feels natural and--most importantly--compelling. All my stars!
In all honesty, I wouldn't have been able to write a clopfic without romance (especially when one of the characters is Fluttershy). Romantic clopfics are the only ones I really enjoy reading, so some of the ones I've read were what inspired me to write this piece (along with the art of Longinius-II, whose adorable picture of Fluttershy was modled Fluttershy's outfit in chapter 3 after), and the unusual pairing was just the icing on the cake. I'd never thought of those two as a couple (I'd always enjoed the common pairings of Fluttershy X Big Macintosh, and the less common Applejack X Soarin') I'm so glad they worked well together. Thank's for all the stars; I'm glad you enjoyed the fic.
Date: 06/06/13 - 03:22 am Title: Chapter 3
An awesome story, I have never given thought to Fluttershy X Soarin, but you made it into a great fic. I really like the build up you had to the actual sex, it added a extra depth that is lost on just sex clopfics. Anyway, good job, a very good read, and good sex too.
Honestly I'd never given it much thought either, but I love unusual ships, and Fluttershy X Soarin' just seemed to work together (I'm not sure how well this same story would have worked out if it was done with the usual Fluttershy X Big Mac pairing). And I'm glad you liked the story; I've written a few ships before, but never a clop fic, so this was all new territory for me. I'm glad it worked out well.